Claude Hopkins

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I just carried out an interview with Drayton Bird (more on that soon) where I asked him his recommendations for books and authors to study.

One thing Drayton said is that you should not restrict your reading to only business books. You should also read for leisure. (I won’t go too much into this as it’s all on the interview.)

However, very soon afterwards I received an email from Ken McCarthy of the System Seminar.

In this email he said something which really resonated with me, and should with you, too, if you intend doing well in your business: Be all you can be. Read.

He points to a post on his blog entitled: Ten classic direct marketing books, where he lists his ten best books on the subject.

This was fantastic news to me as I’m always on the lookout for more material to sink my teeth into (if I was a vampire I’d be biting into books rather than necks).

Here’s his list:

1. My Life in Advertising – Claude Hopkins
2. Tested Advertising Methods – John Caples (Fourth edition or earlier)
3. How I Raised Myself from Failure to Success in Selling – Frank Bettger
4. Scientific Advertising – Claude Hopkins
5. How to Write a Good Advertisement – Victor Schwab
6. My First Sixty Years in Advertising – Maxwell Sackheim
7. Secrets of Successful Direct Mail – Richard Benson
8. Breakthrough Advertising – Eugene Schwartz
9. The Robert Collier Letter Book – Robert Collier
10. Common Sense Direct and Digital Marketing – Drayton Bird

That’s a good list.  I already have seven of them.

However, I think he missed one: How to write sales letters that sell by Drayton Bird which, in my opinion, is even better than The Robert Collier Letter Book.

Going too far, did you say?

Woah, give me a break and check it out yourself before getting the whip out.

Anyway, that is quite a comprehensive list and one you’d do well to take note of.

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You’re probably entirely sane, but my mind works so oddly that sometimes I think I should seek psychiatric help.

I don’t so much have a train of thought as a sort of demented relay race.

Here’s an example.

Did you ever hear the nauseating broadcast by that world-class creep Alec Baldwin, who decided it was appropriateapologise to all America for being a thoroughly unpleasant bully to his 10-year old daughter?

Like many actors, I guess he’s marooned so far up his own derriere that it would take an entire search party to find the real him, but I suppose some oily PR person suggested this nasty little stunt, which can hardly have reassured the poor girl.

Of course that is VERY bad advice, as lots of people who had never heard the phone call in question now have.

What has that to do with our business, you may reasonably ask; but a few years ago I tried to define why I thought anybody with any sense would think direct marketing a good idea.

I came up with three reasons:

1. Why speak to everybody when you only need to speak to somebody?
2. Why guess when you can know?
3. Why not spend your money where it does most good?

Baldwin’s pathetic behaviour called the first reason to mind. His daughter was the one he owed the apology to – but maybe he found it easier to act the whole thing out in front of his no longer quite so adoring public.

Anyhow, that reminded me of Claude Hopkins’ maxim:

“Your message should single out your prospect like a bell-boy paging a man in a crowded hotel lobby.”

Which in turn came to mind when I saw a poster on a metro tram in Manchester.

It was for BUPA.

“Are you made of the right stuff” it said, showing a dummy made of newspaper in front of a lot of modern buildings. Then there was a paragraph of copy.

I thought it was rather an odd way to suggest I go and have a check up, then I actually read the copy. It was nothing to do with check-ups at all.

They were looking for staff. And boy, were they throwing money around in the attempt. In that one tram car alone there were four of those posters. Multiply that by the number of tram cars they were on – and wow!

They’d probably get better results handing out leaflets outside their health centre.

Suppose you’re looking for a job. What possible chance is there that you’d think that’s what BUPA was offering?

Now I’m not going to ramble on too long about my little £19 ad on Gumtree that got me 82 replies (click here to see it) and one superb PA (who also has a talent for copy, by the way) but really.

Spend 90% of the time you spend on any message considering how you single out the prospect.

Here’s another prime example of how not to do it.

The campaign of which this is part is appearing all over the place. It is what they call “who gives a s**t” advertising.

If I were a client of St. James’s Place I would be giving my position serious thought. If this is what they’re doing with their money, what will they do with mine?

No doubt the people who sold it to the client came out with a lot of pretentious tripe about building a brand – but Raymond Rubicam put it: “The only purpose of advertising is to sell. It has no other justification worth mentioning.”

By the way, the technical term for this kind of advertising may come in handy one day, so I’ll give it to you. It is called creative masturbation. Less polite people use another word that rhymes with banking – highly appropriate when you look at most banks’ ads.

By contrast, here’s one of my favourite examples of going straight for the prospect and making a clear promise:

“If you have piles and you have a dollar
Give me your dollar and I’ll get rid of your piles
Or you can keep your dollar and keep your piles”.

With which tasteful work of art I will leave you for today.

Best,
Drayton

P.S.  This is number 37 of Drayton Bird’s 101 free helpful marketing ideas.  You can sign up on the link below for the rest.

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Education is not the filling of a bucket, but the lighting of a fire. W.B.Yeats

In the early 90s, when I first entered sales work, I was sent on a course – a sales course (suprise!).

After that course… ahh… lemme just copy and past an article I wrote:

What’s in an Introduction?

“May I help you?”

“Just looking, thanks.”

“Okay, if you do need anything I’ll be right here.”

“Uh, okay. Thanks.”

Does any of the above sound familiar? I’ll bet it does. It’s the usual scenario when you walk into some type of shop and most of us will probably recognise it, or have been victim to it, at one time or another.

I did some retail work, once upon a time a long, long time ago. Where, or why, it doesn’t matter. Misspent youth, I suppose.

In the process, I’ve had quite a lot, and I mean a LOT, of sales training. One particular course always sticks to my mind as I am convinced that it was probably the best sales training course I have ever encountered, bar none. I won’t go into the nitty gritty, the meat of the course, as such.

I will say that, if I remembered the instructor’s name he would definitely get a mention here. I do remember he was Welsh. It was a long time ago, after all.

After this particular course, being new to the industry and rather naive, I figured I had to do exactly what I was taught when I got back to work. No-one else got duped so easily.

As a result, within a couple of weeks I had phone calls from people from far away lands wanting to speak to me. Yes, I mean the kind of place where no-one wants to go: like Birmingham. You see, these people had heard of me. I had become somewhat of a legend without realising it.

Apparently, I was setting some sort of sales record within this particular company. Wow! I was surprised to say the least. The guys would call up, ask to speak to the manager, and then ask who I was. As soon as I told them, they would say something along the lines of, “aahhhaaa, so YOU’RE him,” leaving me a little bemused. And then they would explain what was going on.

I must admit, it was flattering. Especially when the area manager refused to let me leave the store on a transfer, and literally chucked money at me to stay there. Money I hadn’t worked for.

What exactly was the secret recipe for this, you may wonder? Would you believe it was all in the introduction?

While everyone else stuck to the same old routine, as above, I just went up to the person, stuck my hand out and said, “Hi, I’m Rezbi. What’s your name?” Ninety percent of the time, they would shake my hand and just tell me.

Then I would just invite them over to have a seat and start chatting. During this chat I would ask probing questions to find out exactly what they wanted.

You see, once the introduction was over and we knew each other’s name, it was like we were friends and it was much easier to just talk, as opposed to sell.

Who was it who said, “A stranger is a friend I haven’t yet met?” I forget. But how true it is.

I know it’s difficult on paper, but maybe you’ll get this practical training. Or maybe you’ve already had it. If so, I highly recommend you use it.

Try it. Be comfortable with each other first. Be familiar. Be naive.

So, you see, even people who are sales trained generally tend not to make use of the training.

Which is probably why there are so relatively few highly successful sales men and women around.

If the proven techniques and principles are used you can be good in anything, including sales, in person or in print.

And, let’s face it, the principles aren’t exactly rocket science.

I mean, don’t get me wrong, it’s not easy because you have to work at it… but… it is simple.

All it takes to succeed is the desire to learn how to do a thing… and then do it.

Best,
Rezbi

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Platitudes and generalities roll off the human understanding like water
from a duck. They leave no impression whatever. To say, “Best in the
world,” “Lowest prices in existence,” etc., are at best simply claiming
the expected. But superlatives of that sort are usually damaging. They
suggest looseness of expression, a tendency to exaggerate, a
carelessness of truth. They lead readers to discount all the statements
that you make.

People recognize a certain license in selling talk as they do in poetry.
A man may say, “Supreme in quality” without seeming a liar, though one
may know that other brands are equally as good. One expects a salesman
to put his best foot forward, and excuses some exaggeration born of
enthusiasm. But just for that reason general statements count for
little. And a man inclined to superlatives must expect that his every
statement will be taken with some caution.

But a man who makes a specific claim is either telling the truth or a
lie. People do not expect an advertiser to lie. They know that he can’t
lie in the best mediums. The growing respect for advertising has largely
come through a growing regard for its truth.

So a definite statement is usually accepted. Actual figures are not
generally discounted. Specific facts, when stated, have their full
weight and effect.

This is very important to consider in written or personal salesmanship.
The weight of an argument may often be multiplied by making it specific.
Say that a tungsten lamp gives more light than a carbon and you leave
some doubt. Say that it gives three and one-third times the light and
people realize that you have made tests and comparisons.

A dealer may say, “Our prices have been reduced” without creating any
marked impression. But when he says, “Our prices have been reduced 25
per cent” he gets the full value of his announcement.

A mail order advertiser sold women’s clothing to people of the poorer
classes. For years he used the slogan, “Lowest prices in America.” His
rivals all copied that. Then he guaranteed to undersell any other
dealer. His rivals did likewise. Soon those claims became common to
every advertiser in his line, and they became commonplace.

Then, under able advice, he changed his statement to “Our net profit is
3 per cent.” That was a definite statement and it proved very
impressive. With their volume of business it was evident that their
prices must be minimum. No one could be expected to do business on less
than 3 per cent. The next year their business made a sensational
increase.

At one time in the automobile business there was a general impression
that profits were excessive. One well-advised advertiser came out with
the statement, “Our profit is 9 per cent.” Then he cited actual costs on
the hidden parts of a $1,500 car. They amounted to $735, without
including anything one could easily see. This advertiser made a great
success along those lines at that time.

Shaving soaps have long been advertised “Abundant lather,” “Does not dry
on the face,” “Acts quickly,” etc. One advertiser had as good a chance
as another to impress those claims.

Then a new maker came into the field. It was a tremendously difficult
field, for every customer had to be taken from someone else. He stated
specific facts. He said, “Multiplies itself in lather 250 times.”
“Softens the beard in one minute.” “Maintains its creamy fullness for
ten minutes on the face.” “The final result of testing and comparing 130
formulas.” Perhaps never in advertising has there been a quicker and
greater success in an equally difficult field.

Makers of safety razors have long advertised quick shaves. One maker
advertised a 78-second shave. That was definite. It indicated actual
tests. That man at once made a sensational advance in his sales.

In the old days all beers were advertised as “Pure.” The claim made no
impression. The bigger the type used, the bigger the folly. After
millions had been spent to impress a platitude, one brewer pictured a
plate glass room where beer was cooled in filtered air. He pictured a
filter of white wood pulp through which every drop was cleared. He told
how bottles were washed four times by machinery. How he went down 4,000
feet for pure water. How 1,018 experiments had been made to attain a
yeast to give beer that matchless flavor. And how all the yeast was
forever made from that adopted mother cell.

All the claims were such as any brewer might have made. They were mere
essentials in ordinary brewing. But he was the first to tell the people
about them, while others cried merely “pure beer.” He made the greatest
success that was ever made in beer advertising.

“Used the world over” is a very elastic claim. Then one advertiser said,
“Used by the peoples of 52 nations,” and many another has followed.

One statement may take as much room as another, yet a definite statement
be many times as effective. The difference is vast. If a claim is worth
making, make it in the most impressive way.

All these effects must be studied. Salesmanship-in-print is very
expensive. Every word you use may cost $10 to insert. A salesman’s loose
talk matters little. But when you are talking to millions at enormous
cost, the weight of your claims is important.

No generality has any weight whatever. It is like saying, “How do you
do?” when you have no intention of inquiring about one’s health. But
specific claims when made in print are taken at their value.

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The competent advertising man must understand psychology. The more he
knows about it the better. He must learn that certain effects lead to
certain reactions, and use that knowledge to increase results and avoid
mistakes.

Human nature is perpetual. In most respects it is the same today as in
the time of Caesar. So the principles of psychology are fixed and
enduring. You will never need to unlearn what you learn about them.

We learn, for instance, that curiosity is one of the strongest of human
incentives. We employ it whenever we can. Puffed Wheat and Puffed Rice
were made successful largely through curiosity. “Grains puffed to 8
times normal size.” “Foods shot from guns.” “125 million steam
explosions caused in every kernel.” These foods were failures before
that factor was discovered.

We learn that cheapness is not a strong appeal. Americans are
extravagant. They want bargains but not cheapness. They want to feel
that they can afford to eat and have and wear the best. Treat them as
though they could not and they resent your attitude.

We learn that people judge largely by price. They are not experts. In
the British National Gallery is a painting which is announced in the
catalog to have cost $750,000. Most people at first pass it by at a
glance. Then later they get farther on in the catalog and learn what the
painting cost. They return then and surround it.

A department store advertised at one Easter time a $1,000 hat, and the
floor could not hold the women who came to see it.

We often employ this factor in psychology. Perhaps we are advertising a
valuable formula. To merely say that would not be impressive. So we
state–as a fact–that we paid $100,000 for that formula. That statement
when tried has won a wealth of respect.

Many articles are sold under guarantee–so commonly sold that guarantees
have ceased to be impressive. But one concern made a fortune by offering
a dealer’s signed warrant. The dealer to whom one paid his money agreed
in writing to pay it back if asked. Instead of a far-away stranger, a
neighbor gave the warrant. The results have led many to try that plan,
and it has always proved effective.

Many have advertised, “Try it for a week. If you don’t like it we’ll
return your money.” Then someone conceived the idea of sending goods
without any money down, and saying, “Pay in a week if you like them.”
That proved many times as impressive.

One great advertising man stated the difference in this way: “Two men
came to me, each offering me a horse. Both made equal claims. They were
good horses, kind and gentle. A child could drive them. One man said,
‘Try the horse for a week. If my claims are not true, come back for your
money.’ The other man also said, ‘Try the horse for a week.’ But he
added, ‘Come and pay me then.’ I naturally bought the second man’s
horse.”

Now countless things–cigars, typewriters, washing machines, books,
etc.–are sent out in this way on approval. And we find that people are
honest. The losses are very small.

An advertiser offered a set of books to business men. The advertising
was unprofitable, so he consulted another expert. The ads were
impressive. The offer seemed attractive. “But,” said the second man,
“let us add one little touch which I have found effective. Let us offer
to put the buyer’s name in gilt lettering on each book.” That was done,
and with scarcely another change in the ads they sold some hundreds of
thousands of books. Through some peculiar kink in human psychology that
name in gilt gave much added value to the books.

Many send out small gifts, like memorandum books, to customers and
prospects. They get very small results. One man sent out a letter to the
effect that he had a leather-covered book with the man’s name on it. It
was waiting for him and would be sent on request. The form of request
was enclosed, and it also asked for certain information. That
information indicated lines on which the man might be sold.

Nearly all men, it was found, filled out that request and supplied the
information. When a man knows that something belongs to him–something
with his name on–he will make the effort to get it, even though the
thing is a trifle.

In the same way it is found that an offer limited to a certain class of
people is far more effective than a general offer. For instance, an
offer limited to veterans of the war. Or to members of a lodge or sect.
Or to executives. Those who are entitled to any seeming advantage will
go a long way not to lose that advantage.

An advertiser suffered much from substitution. He said, “Look out for
substitutes,” “Be sure you get this brand,” etc., with no effect. Those
were selfish appeals.

Then he said, “Try our rivals’ too”–said it in his headlines. He
invited comparisons and showed that he did not fear them. That corrected
the situation. Buyers were careful to get the brand so conspicuously
superior that its maker could court a trial of the rest.

Two advertisers offered food products nearly identical. Both offered a
full-size package as an introduction. But one gave his package free. The
other bought the package. A coupon was good at any store for a package,
for which the maker paid retail price.

The first advertiser failed and the second succeeded. The first even
lost a large part of the trade he had. He cheapened his product by
giving a 15-cent package away. It is hard to pay for an article which
has once been free. It is like paying railroad fare after traveling on a
pass.

The other gained added respect for his article by paying retail price
to let the user try it. An article good enough for the maker to buy is
good enough for the user to buy. It is vastly different to pay 15 cents
to let you try an article than to simply say “It’s free.”

So with sampling. Hand an unwanted product to a housewife and she pays
it slight respect. She is in no mood to see its virtues. But get her to
ask for a sample after reading your story, and she is in a very
different position. She knows your claims. She is interested in them,
else she would not act. And she expects to find the qualities you told.

There is a great deal in mental impression. Submit five articles exactly
alike and five people may each choose one of them. But point out in one
some qualities to notice and everyone will find them. The five people
then will all choose the same article.

If people can be made sick or well by mental impressions, they can be
made to favor a certain brand in that way. And that, on some lines, is
the only way to win them.

Two concerns, side by side, sold women’s clothing on installments. The
appeal, of course, was to poor girls who desired to dress better. One
treated them like poor girls; and made the bare business offer.

The other put a woman in charge–a motherly, dignified, capable woman.
They did business in her name. They used her picture. She signed all ads
and letters. She wrote to these girls like a friend. She knew herself
what it meant to a girl not to be able to dress her best. She had long
sought a chance to supply women good clothes and give them all season to
pay. Now she was able to do so, with the aid of the men behind her.

There was no comparison in those two appeals. It was not long before
this woman’s long-established next-door rival had to quit.

The backers of this business sold housefurnishings on installments.
Sending out catalogs promiscuously did not pay. Offering long-time
credit often seems like a reflection.

But when a married woman bought garments from Mrs. —-, and paid as
agreed, they wrote to her something like this: “Mrs. —-, whom we
know, tells us that you are one of her good customers. She has dealt
with you, she says, and you do just as you agree. So we have opened with
you a credit account on our books, good any time you wish. When you
want anything in furnishings, just order it. Pay nothing in advance. We
are glad to send it without any investigation to a person recommended as
you are.”

That was flattering. Naturally those people, when they wanted some
furniture, would order from that house.

There are endless phases to psychology. Some people know them by
instinct. Many of them are taught by experience. But we learn most of
them from others. When we see a winning method we note it down for use
when occasion offers.

These things are very important. An identical offer made in a different
way may bring multiplied returns. Somewhere in the mines of business
experience we must find the best method somehow.

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