How good is your judgment?
Below are two ads, both over 100 years old.
Can you guess which did better?


You’ll find the answer near the end of this piece.
How did you do?
Now let me tell you about them.
I originally saw these ads during my first job as a creative director, some 40 years ago. Our biggest client sold washing machines direct – and I must have done a pretty good job as our chief competitor went broke.
I would like to say this was entirely because of my uncanny talent, but it was largely because we had a better product.
Anyhow, I had read something by David Ogilvy saying that before he wrote for any new client he studied all the advertising in the relevant category over the previous 20 years. I went back even further.
I found a book called My First 50 Years in Advertising, by Max Sackheim – which is excellent, by the way.
Max eventually co-founded one of the first specialist direct marketing agencies – Sackheim and Sherman, and he told the story of the winning ad, one of the first he ever wrote, in the late 1890s.
Anyhow, this leads to my next hint, taken from the great John Caples, who was once asked by the Wall Street Journal if the principles he laid down in the ’30′s and ’40′s still applied.
“Times change. People don’t” he responded.
So, study what has worked in the past – even the distant past.
Which ad worked better? “Let this machine do your washing free” (with a happier face and much longer copy) trounced the negative approach and set Max Sackheim’s career going.
I read his story and then wrote an ad headed, “Try this washing machine free in your home for 7 days”. I even used the same typeface, which at that time was out of fashion.
I decided on this approach partly because I had found that once people had the washing machine in their homes hardly any complained, whereas only 20% of normal enquirers converted to sales.
The ad worked like a charm, and saved a ton of money in salesman’s commission
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Here’s a sad postscript.
After I quit the agency to go into the mail order business, they forgot the principles I had listed for them, started getting “creative”, and the client went broke.
The poor fellow who owned the company committed suicide. So good marketing can be a matter of life and death. And fancy ideas can kill.
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(Max Sackheim and his partner devised the concept of the modern book club, and I shall write to you about him again, as he wrote one of the most successful advertisements ever, which ran for 40 years).
Best,
Drayton
P.S. This is number 24 of Drayton Bird’s 101 free helpful marketing ideas. You can sign up on the link below for the rest.
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Filed under Drayton Bird, Uncategorized, copywriting by on Mar 22nd, 2010. Comment.
I think of a headline as an ad for an ad. As a
marketer, you should too. And be aware of the
following truth.
“On average five times as many people read the
headlines as read the body copy. It follows that
unless your headline sells your product, you have
wasted 90 percent of your money.”
Who said this? The late David Ogilvy, world-
famous founder of the ad agency Ogilvy & Mather
and author of the best-seller “Confessions of an
Advertising Man.”
I call today’s headline shortcut Ways To/Reasons
Why.
Here are some headline examples which illustrate
this powerful and underused technique.
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Seven Reasons Why Information Publishing is
Today’s Best Business Opportunity
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11 Secrets I Wasn’t Taught in School That Have
Put Millions in My Bank Account
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Ten Ways to Survive and Prosper
During the Current Recession
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Six Ways to Beat the Coming Tax Increase
*******
13 Inside Secrets to Getting the Best Deal
On Your Next Automobile
Car Dealers Do Not Want You to Know
*******
101 Little-Known Ways to Add
Perceived Value to Your Home
So it Sells Fast For at Least
98.5 Percent of the Full Asking Price!
*******
17 Ways to Make More Money From Home
With Your Own Internet Business
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There are Three Good Reasons an Internet Offer
Succeeds… And You Already Know Two of Them–
The Third Reason May Be The Final Piece of the
Puzzle That Makes Your Next Offer Click
*******
The main reason this wonderful technique works so
well rests on a very simple principle that is a
powerful motivator for all of us.
Curiosity!
Think about your own experience as a consumer.
When you see an ad that lists a number of ways to
do something beneficial to you, can you resist
checking it out?
I cannot. I’m always intrigued. I want to know the
“ways.” Or “secrets.” Or “reasons.” And once into
the copy, if it’s good, I often order.
Do you relate to this?
My experience has proven to me most consumers
feel the same way.
The formula for the technique Ways To/Reasons
Why is very simple. Here it is:
(Specific number) ways to dramatize (the big
benefit)
I look forward to seeing your highly charged
headlines and, as always, hearing about your greater
success.
Since the headline shortcut series began, so many
Success Margin subscribers have sent in beautiful
headlines. I’m considering a contest for the best
ones.
Your correspondent,
Ted Nicholas
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MARGIN, the Internet’s most valuable success and
marketing e-zine. For a complimentary
subscription, visit http://www.tednicholas.com/
Filed under Ted Nicholas, copywriting by on Mar 17th, 2010. Comment.
Some time ago I went to see a client who asked me where I get the ideas for these effusions from.
All sorts of places is the answer, but the question stimulated me to write Where to get ideas.
I love history, so I’ll start with Vincenzo Lunardi, a Neapolitan who in 1784 was the first person in England to ascend in a balloon. They say 200,000 people watched him, including King George III through a telescope from St. James’s Palace.
Afterwards the intrepid balloonist wrote to the King describing it all. Besides a dog, a cat and a pigeon, which escaped – the pigeon, I mean – he took a leg of chicken and a bottle of wine, admirable chap. Here is a splendid picture.

The bottle of wine reminds me of an old film I saw of David Ogilvy talking about how to get ideas. He said a bottle – then corrected himself – half a bottle of good claret helped. Since I know a bottle was more about his mark, I suspect he edited the truth so as not to drive young writers and art directors to drink before their time.
I do not entirely recommend booze as the high road to inspiration, but it can be. I once drafted a mailing to get legacies for Save the Children when distinctly squiffy. It worked well for many years.
I was completely potted when I wrote perhaps my best mailing. Professor Derek Holder, founder of the Institute of Direct Marketing, had come to show me a letter inviting potential sponsors to the launch of his new venture at the Barbican.
With the refreshing candour a truckload of wine confers, I said it was lousy because it was too impersonal, but I would revise it. Gathering my addled wits, I dictated something which my then PA, Daphne, transcribed. I edited it, and off he went into the late afternoon sunshine. I didn’t hear from him until he asked if I was coming to the event. There was a full house. The letter got over 70% response. Derek never looked back.
I don’t know what happened to that letter – I wish I had kept it. But I always feel pleased to have contributed, despite my unsteady condition, to one of the most beneficial things direct marketing has seen.
One good source of ideas is called getting on with it. There is such a temptation to look at that accusing blank screen or sheet of paper and go and do something else. But the mere act of writing gets you going.
- Trollope used to get up every morning very early – I think at 5:30 – and write for 3 hours before going to his job at the Post Office.
- Richard Strauss used to be shown to his study by his domineering wife with the admonition. “Richard, go and compose.”
- Sheridan had not written the last act of “The Rivals” on the Friday before it was due to open. They locked him in a room with paper, ink and bottles of port until he did so.
But as I said, the demon drink is neither the ideal nor the only way to get ideas. Many people find exercise helps. I have had many of my better thoughts when riding my bike or walking my dog when I had one. Beethoven also enjoyed long walks. Mozart liked to play billiards.
Some years ago a French businessman lamented the growing practice in France of taking showers rather than baths, which he believed better for getting ideas. Victor Ross, former chairman of The Reader’s Digest, Europe, responsible for some of the most effective direct marketing innovations, has a theory about this.
He says these methods encourage the circulation of the blood to the brain. Another example he gives is shaving. Many people report having had good ideas when shaving.
In the film I mentioned, David Ogilvy, with one of his wonderfully frank and old-fashioned turns of phrase, said that things sometimes came to him when “at stool”. That’s a form of exercise, too. Come to think of it, it’s also where I was when I had the idea for this. I guess you could call it straining for ideas.
Best,
Drayton
P.S. This is number 42 of Drayton Bird’s 101 free helpful marketing ideas. You can sign up on the link below for the rest.
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Out of all the 101 helpful ideas I send out, one gets the biggest reaction – by far.
Yet it is the easiest to follow, and every single person who reads it has the same reaction. “I know that – but I’m not doing it”.
The idea says, in effect, “Don’t just sit there thinking about it, get on with it.”
When I gave introductory talks to my agency trainees I used to say the world is divided into two types of people. Those who make things happen, and those to whom things happen.
When David Ogilvy wanted to get the Shell account, he didn’t just sit there thinking. He got on a plane.
I know you want to do better because so many of you open my emails.
Why not start by giving yourself a 28-day free trial of one of my programmes?
Frankly, I’m a bit puzzled that you haven’t – because if you decide to go ahead at the end of the 28 days, the worse that can happen under the terms of my guarantee is that you will double your money.
But why am I criticising you when I can’t even count properly. That was pointed out to me by Al, who sends my emails out.
I told you I was stopping registration today – because I was counting 5 days from Monday – but all my emails this week went out a day late because Al had man-flu.
So you have over the weekend, till the next working day, to decide whether you prefer thinking about things to doing them.
The Gold group has only one place left, and the others are filling up.
Until then, if you missed it yesterday, here’s me taking apart a mailing that was hugely successful.
Best,
Drayton
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Yet it is the easiest to follow, and every single person who reads it has the same reaction. “I know that – but I’m not doing it”.
The idea says, in effect, “Don’t just sit there thinking about it, get on with it.”
When I gave introductory talks to my agency trainees I used to say the world is divided into two types of people. Those who make things happen, and those to whom things happen.
When David Ogilvy wanted to get the Shell account, he didn’t just sit there thinking. He got on a plane.
I know you want to do better because so many of you open my emails.
Why not start by giving yourself a 28-day free trial of one of my programmes?
Frankly, I’m a bit puzzled that you haven’t – because if you decide to go ahead at the end of the 28 days, the worse that can happen under the terms of my guarantee is that you will double your money.
But why am I criticising you when I can’t even count properly. That was pointed out to me by Al, who sends my emails out.
I told you I was stopping registration today – because I was counting 5 days from Monday – but all my emails this week went out a day late because Al had man-flu.
So you have over the weekend, till the next working day, to decide whether you prefer thinking about things to doing them.
The Gold group has only one place left, and the others are filling up.
Until then, if you missed it yesterday, here’s me taking apart a mailing that was hugely successfulOut of all the 101 helpful ideas I send out, one gets the biggest reaction – by far.
Yet it is the easiest to follow, and every single person who reads it has the same reaction. “I know that – but I’m not doing it”.
The idea says, in effect, “Don’t just sit there thinking about it, get on with it.”
When I gave introductory talks to my agency trainees I used to say the world is divided into two types of people. Those who make things happen, and those to whom things happen.
When David Ogilvy wanted to get the Shell account, he didn’t just sit there thinking. He got on a plane.
I know you want to do better because so many of you open my emails.
Why not start by giving yourself a 28-day free trial of one of my programmes?
Frankly, I’m a bit puzzled that you haven’t – because if you decide to go ahead at the end of the 28 days, the worse that can happen under the terms of my guarantee is that you will double your money.
But why am I criticising you when I can’t even count properly. That was pointed out to me by Al, who sends my emails out.
I told you I was stopping registration today – because I was counting 5 days from Monday – but all my emails this week went out a day late because Al had man-flu.
So you have over the weekend, till the next working day, to decide whether you prefer thinking about things to doing them.
The Gold group has only one place left, and the others are filling up.
Until then, if you missed it yesterday, here’s me taking apart a mailing that was hugely successful.
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